小学三年级英语作文:My school

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My school is a beatful place. there are about three thousands students and one hundend teachers.there are many threes and flowers around it.we can go to school from monday to friday.I have a lot of friends in the school. At present,my major course is chinese,english,mathmatics,sports,science.My favorite course is english.I want to learn a lot of konwledge.