小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. His name is bullet. We know each other for long years.He is thin.He is also my colluage.We had dinner party every month.He is not smoking,but can little drink.He had a little baby.Though we are poor, but we are happy,We also had same hobby. See "where is pappy" every Friday night.