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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9036[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分27.0分
评语:

单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段;副词使用偏多。

用户练习作文:

You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.You will see the city still there.Yet if you are out during these hours even late at night, there is no need to be afraid.

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