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2014高考英语作文预测集中训练8:环保的重要性

发布时间:2014-06-06 17:48浏览次数:1010
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Almost everyone knows that water covers three-fourths of the earth’s surface .Most of it ,however ,is in the oceans and is too salty to drink . Also ,some of it is frozen and cannot be used . In fact ,less than one percent is left for the use of people ,animals and plant life.
All through history men have tried to build their homes near the sources of fresh water .Now fresh water is becoming scarce ,but more and more is needed because of the increasing number of people in the world .Some industries also use large amounts of fresh water in the production of things such as steel ,petroleum ,paper and rubber and so on.
Scientists estimate that the need for fresh water will have doubled by the year 2003. If they are correct ,we must find new ways of saving it or producing it. Some nations have worked on the problem and are already sharing their information with others. They are trying to keep their rivers from becoming polluted .Deep wells are also being dug ,and rain water is being collected in huge artificial lakes .In one way or another ,they hope to provide enough water to satisfy the needs of their people. 
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请作者仔细检查词汇的拼写,同时学术词汇量还要多多积累;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;结构不严谨,几乎没有使用衔接词,上下文衔接欠流畅。

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As we all know that nowadays we are living in a dangerous earth which is polluted heavily. If we could't do anything to stop the pollutiong we would die out one day. The first thing I want to say is the air pollution. My home is in a small village. There I have fresh air to breath everymoring so that I feel spiritual all day. But I work in Chengdu and live in an apartment in the west of downtown. When I get home I feel hot and it's hard to breath. Why? Because it is filled with cars and factories here. And the population is quite large. Thus I think we should reduce the use of private cars and move some facotories to a small town in order that lead some workers move away from downtown. The second thing I want to say the water polluting. I heard from my father that years ago they could catch fish directly in the small steam in front of our house. But now you can hardly see on in it. Why? That's becuase the water is full of chemisty and posion. Fish can't live in it now. What should we do? I think the goverment should pay more attention on it to control the 排放 of 废水 seriously. Besides what I said, there are many other kinds of pollution. Hense It's necessary to do something to improve the enviroment.

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