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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From: hubin@163.com Date: 30.june.2014 To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: Establish business relationship Dear KPOHsales, I know your conpany new product of the product number is 5670 during the exhibition in New York, from 15,Dec to 22,Dec. I'm very interested in it. Please get us your price list and instruction. Thanksgiving your cooperation, and hope us establish business relationship. Thanks and best regards Hubin
