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新东方托福高分作文:选择慢节奏生活还是快节奏生活?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:50浏览次数:5829
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题目要求:

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。
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文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;全文结构较为严谨;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。

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In our 21 century, the increasing people are getting faster, they want to earn more money in shorter time. As a result, more and more people have work and earn money, but they have no real life. Of course, there still someones have a very slow pattern on their life, but most of them have no plan about their future. They hold different views on their own life style. As to me, I am kind of the people who become faster and faster, but I think sometimes we should slow down.

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