小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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I have a schoolmate. he name is jim. he is very tall is a handsome boy. he likes play tennis.every weekend we are go to the gym together.he is an accountant at his father's company work. marco is jim's father.he is a gentleman. the company's boss. mary is jim's mother.she is very beautiful.she is a fashion mode. she is very busy and usually go to the paris .when she comes back always give us take present. i love jim's family people. we are best friend.