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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36946
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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注意下文中出现的句法错误;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;文中用词稍显贫乏,同时请注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

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today i will intorduce you one of my friend, her name is linlin, she is smart and open, you will fell very happy when you are with her. in another, she is very sweet, we are share the happy things each other, she is very kind to me. now we lived in differenty cities, she ofen reminds me that i must take care myself and pay attention to my health, she just like mother. i fell very happy for having this kind of friend, i will cherry the friend relationship forever.

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