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today i will intorduce you one of my friend, her name is linlin, she is smart and open, you will fell very happy when you are with her. in another, she is very sweet, we are share the happy things each other, she is very kind to me. now we lived in differenty cities, she ofen reminds me that i must take care myself and pay attention to my health, she just like mother. i fell very happy for having this kind of friend, i will cherry the friend relationship forever.