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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
On being careful about spending money If somebody tells me that it's not necessary to save money as our living level comes up a lot from those old days and money is supposed to be spent , I surely will roll my eyes and sigh , saying that you'd better be rich . There is no way that we don't need to be careful about spending money . It's an virtue which we've been thought since we were young . And being careful on it doesn't mean we are stingy or preoccupied . It just means we should spend our money more reasonably . I'm sure that , as an ordinary person , you won't spend your whole salary only on a pretty bag . And you would think twice if the money you're going to spend is a lot . That exactly prove that we all know we should use our money carefully and it is our nature to be careful about it . And we all now use our student price to get discount and we all will look for a way that we can use less money to buy whatever we need . And you must bargained once or twice . All in all , being careful about spending money is a smart consumer attitude . It not only can help you to save your money but also can help to arrange your budget and make your consumption more reasonable and acceptable . It does no harm to our life but brings adventages .
