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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12941
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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能够使用一些简单的从句;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;请注意分段。

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This picture shows us that even in the same home,parents don't have to chat with their children face to face.They just need to type words on screen and send it to their sons or girls .It reflects the impact of the internet on the way people communicate .There is no longer need to chat to each other facely,people can contact through social softwares ,such as QQ,WeChat and Fetion.The internet make people's communication much more easier and instant ,but will it replace the tradtional face-to-face contact? In my opinion,the answer is "No.it won't".With internet communication ,we cannot see each other face and don't konw their expressions ,we cannot what p

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