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What is the greatest use of life? You may think it in your mind. Let me share my opinions with you. To your life meaningfully, always trying your best is a good attitude. If you can be more committed and driven, you will be succeed much easily than others who inputs less into life. Remember, doing but not saying. You’d better try to the best of your abilities rather than just thinking about it. I mean once you have determined what you want to do, just do it, not just talking about your grand ambitions. Even if you may fail cruelly, at least you have tried. When you have a review of the experience of life, you won’t feel regretful because you done it. I also want to say don’t be addicated in the world website. You know more and more people spend most parts of their life on the Internet. Though Internet is really important and essential in life. But it’s not so wise to spend so much time on line. You can life can totally be more meaningful than now. Go to the real world, making friends, chatting with others or doing something for the one in trouble.
