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In the long run of our life, you may confront different kinds of tough problems. No one’s life will go well all the time because life is full of troubles. So you may ask yourself again and again about how to deal with the problems we faced or we will face one day. As for me, I think we’d better keep composed when we are in trouble. What we need to do first is to think about a good way to solve the problems. Never feel depressed even if the problems you are facing is such a tough one. Remember to keep your mind open and be ready to accept others’ help or suggestions instead of being buried in trouble individually. Maintaining an optimistic attitude is surely a good way for you to deal with problems. Like the sunflowers, where there is the sun, where it turns. So let’s face our life with smile and face towards the sun. Happiness will be here waiting for you.