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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4840
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

In the long run of our life, you may confront different kinds of tough problems. No one’s life will go well all the time because life is full of troubles. So you may ask yourself again and again about how to deal with the problems we faced or we will face one day. As for me, I think we’d better keep composed when we are in trouble. What we need to do first is to think about a good way to solve the problems. Never feel depressed even if the problems you are facing is such a tough one. Remember to keep your mind open and be ready to accept others’ help or suggestions instead of being buried in trouble individually. Maintaining an optimistic attitude is surely a good way for you to deal with problems. Like the sunflowers, where there is the sun, where it turns. So let’s face our life with smile and face towards the sun. Happiness will be here waiting for you.

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