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2012年12月1日雅思大作文真题:the Computerized Technologies

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home . Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, with the development of the technology, Internet has becoming increasingly popular among people.The discussion of whether using Internet is passive or positive has kept for years.Different people hold different opinions. As for me, Internet is favorable to our daily life. There is no doubt that our life has been changed greatly science the Internet born.The advantages of this technology ,obvisously,are remarkable.First, Internet play an important role in our daily communicating.People can chat online through various softwares,the distance has not been a awful hinder .Second, as a new plat of communication ,There are increasingly information spread on the internet and you can acquire them via computer and smartphone, which means we have more opportunities to learn new stuff happening around us.Last but not least,with the thrive of Internet ,the unemployment problem is being solved,this new profession has attracted millions people choose Internet industry as their life career.

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