小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I will introduce one of my friend to you today, her name is Linlin, she is smart and open, you will feel very happy when you are with her. In another, she is very sweet, we share many happy things each other, she is very kind to me. now we live in different cities, she often reminds me that i must take care myself and pay attention to my health, she just like a mother. I feel very happy for having this kind of friend, i will cherry the friend relationship forever.