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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
nowadays,more and more people use electronic communication replace face to face communication.in my opinion,i think the way is harmful . there is little advantage to use face to face communication than computer communication, at the first place ,we can feel warm by face to face relate and take care of our parents. at the second place,sometime we are attract with kind of word,however our attention won't pay attention to our parents. at the third place,if you used electronic ,you wouldn't help your parents to do household duties. all in all.electronic communication will
