高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In the past , the hometown around the trees which some birds live in . The river are much more clearly than the sky that have some fish are playing . many house which seem old at the either side of less widely street . People's living and working are so many pool . At now ,there are much more highly house and more and more car .and the industry develop so quickly that the environment go worst day by day .trees less and less ,the fish are disappearing .so pollution treatment is necessary