高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

In the past, the hometown around some trees which some birds live. The rivers are much clear than the sky that have some fish are playing. Many houses which seem old at the either side of less widely street. the People living and working are so much poor. At now,there are more highly house and more and more car.And the industry develop so quickly that the environment go bad day by day.Trees less and less, fish are disappearing.so pollution treatment is necessary