行文流畅,但衔接词比较少;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文章中拼写错误较多,同时请作者增加词汇丰富度;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Mr. Johnson: We recevied that your company's industris a number of 3000 at the 12th 22.But according to our signing of the No.35 order that indicate the number of is 3500. We not recevied remaining 500 to now day.please check your product list.And we are looking forward to your early reply!