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经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
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Now.Students usually angry with thier parents.even don't speak to thier parents.why?Maybe,Parents so notise our achievement that we are angry .Of course,we may be sensitive.In order to solve our problem.First, we should talk with our parents.Then,we should be satisfied with our parents.Finally,we can listen to music or play the ball,Forget unhappy things.