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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第11篇:从电视还是书本上能学到更多东西

发布时间:2013-08-12 17:05浏览次数:675
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

People learn more by watching television than by reading books.

人们是从电视中还是书本上能学到更多的东西。不同的人有不同的看法。

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

In my opinion, people learn more by reading books than by watching television. Books are the source of knowledge and television are just becoming commercial ads broadcaster. A good book will show you many things than you anticipate but a television will not make you feel wisdom of knowledge. We have heard many famous people say that books originate knowledge and power and television is just a tool for entertainment. So we should spend more time on reading books while not on watching television in our spare time. And when we read books, we can choose what we like to read. But if we are watching television, we can only accept the programs arranged by TV station. And the programs are cramped with ads and horror scene more and more. So we should read books and seek knowledge when we have time and interest. And it is the fast way for us to get educated by reading certain books in different fields. We will smell the scent of ink and feel the smooth of paper in our hands. We can know what is going on in the outside world by watching television but this is not the most important thing in our lives. The more we study, the more powerful we will feel. So, let's pick our books and start reading and shut down the television as soon as possible.

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