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Mr. Johnson: We yet received that a number of your company's product is 3000 at the 12th 22.But according to our signing of the No.35 order that indicate the number of product is 3500. We not received remaining 500 to nowadays.Please check your cor-portion product list.And we are looking forward to your early reply!