小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,her name is Lily.She is a beautiful girl,she has black and long hair,her eyes is bright and big.She is a nurse and worked in the department of pediatrics .She like playing badminton and running.She always looks very happy . In a word, she is a lovely girl.