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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12942
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文章能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,但词汇表达丰富度不足;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the internet, the internet communication are replacing the face-to-face contact. For example, people not only can write the e-mail to their friends and relations, moreover, they can see each other by video. When the people miss someone, the only thing they need to do is to turn on their computer and open a communication software. For the reason of working or studying, many people maybe leave their hometown where have their many friends and relations. They only could write letter to their friends and relations before the arise of internet and phone. And the phone can't send the image of the people. and the internet communication help people slove this problem. through the internet , we not only can heard their sounds, but also can see their image. it is the convience way the contact the people compactly.

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