2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

作者词汇基本功很好，一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，不过要注意词汇拼写的检查；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

From these graphs,we can draw a conclusion tha the number of travel has increased rapidly between 2000 and 2005 with economic develpmetn of country. There are two factors accounting for these changes. Above of all, people's living standards have been constantly improve year after year. Though seeing plenty of brillant sceneries by means of TV,newspaper and magazine etc., we cannot enjoy the live splended scenery. Therefore they prefer to spending more money travel everywhere.Besides,owing to all sorts of presures in mordern life, the person feel like touring outside.It not only relaxes completely our physical,but broaden our horizental as well. Then the more enegetic we have ,the more efficient our work create,This is the reason more and more people would like to journey all parts of the world.However, the trip which may take us longer time than we expected.Another one is that during holidays the expense on travel would reach twice as expensive as normal price. So some of us grudge paying for it . In my opinion, as the economic develpmetn aims at making our life better,which result of our health in poor condition. I advice that taking lots of appropriate activities in our spare time,for example ,jogging,playing basketball or climbing and so on. In this way,can we spend less money and keep strong body at any time.