小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；简单句比重过高，另应加强复杂句的练习；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。

i have a great friend.his name is lee.we are go to school together.i like play basketball and lee like play football,but we are also a good friends.i have black hair,his green.haha,and we are love each others.tomorrow is my birthday what he give me surprise.good friend is write too hard.he know me do not swimming.