2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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A couple of data from Bureau of labor Statistics indict that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.These data are for persons age 25 and over, earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.A couple of data from Bureau of labor Statistics indict that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates.These data are for persons age 25 and over, earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.