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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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I am very interested in your new prodution during the exhibiton which was held in New York on 15th,De. The item is 5670. Could you please send me a price list and instruction. We hope to establish business relationship with each other. Iam looking forward to hearing from you .
