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To: sales-department@hotmail.com; Mr. Johnson From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com; wang Haiyang Time: 13:00, December 23th, 2008 Dear Mr. Johnson: We have received 3000 produces from your company at December 22nd. However, according to our signing of No.35 order, the produces' number should be 3500. We have not received the other 500 produces. Please check the product list as soon as. We hope to your early reply!