2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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The most interesting place I'm very happy that my foregin friend well visit my hometown,I well take her to the most interesting place that is zoo.prehaps you well want to know why it is the most interesting place.I will tell you. Firstly,I will take her to see anmilas, for example,tigers,brieds and fresh so on.Then, when we are tired,we can walk with communicating.And,we can eat small foods.Finally, I can tell her that these anmials history. I think that I can make her feel at home,I will mke her happy,and we will spend a relaxed and fascinated time.We must be happy everydau.