题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇使用熟练灵活,但要注意避免拼写错误;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错。
Nowadays,computer plays an important part in our modern life. Like everything else,computer also has both favorable and unfavourable aspects. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows. First of all, computer with quick and accurate which can be used to caculate. To some extent,so fast is its speed that it greatly promote working productiveness. Morover, without going out of our house,we can buy some daily necessities,search imformation that we need at any time and acquire the latest news from all over the world. Eventually,the reason why the computer was universal used is that is provide a widely communicating field with us. For instance, chatting with each other by e-mail which costs less money and save much time. Every coin,however,has two sides,for the negative aspects are also apparent. As we know,since the computer brings about lots of benefits which make make us lazier and lazier. To make matter worse,though it is of great convenience for us to communicate each other on the Internet,the original warm relationship may become cold,for people will have fewer opportunities to closely talk each other face to face.Worst of all, computer somtimes will have virus caused by eletric hackers so that plenty of significant imformation will be lost. Through above analysis, I conviced that the positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects. Therefore,I firmly believe that computer will have a bright future.