2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了一些简单的从句；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强，且注意拼写错误；请注意分段。

i very gald of hearing you will come to visit my hometown .there are so many things that i want to show you.frist of all,i will take you to the museum.only in this way,can you konw my hometown well.and you can have good feeling to my homtown.then,there is no doubt that i will take you to visit my primary school ,senior shool.i want to you can go through the path of my children with me.then,we can improve our muturn understanding.the food is the topic forever in my mind.so ,i will take to enjoy the delious food in my hometown,such as ,mapo beancurd,which is my favorite food.in a word,i expect you come here.