2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hello， my best frident Jone ，welcome to my hometown。As you kown i am living in beijing ， which is the most beatiful city in china。There are lots of places of interests in beijing but i love the great wall the best。 There even an saying goes that “you are not a real man if you had not been to the great wall 。It is an ancient building which can date back to the qin dynasty 。