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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2126
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’. These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents,and many students even argue with their parents ,and don't talk with each other more than several days . and our class had a hitted discussion about this program . different students has different opinions. some students think perhaps we should have a real conversation with our parents so that they can understand the things that we really want. therefor , we shouldn't lose our tamper to our parents . the other students suggests that whatever our parents did are always think for us ,even sometimes we didn't really agree with them . but we shouldn't argue with them so that will makes them down. That’s all for my speech. Thank you

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