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经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
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Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’. These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents,and many students even argue with their parents ,and don't talk with each other more than several days . and our class had a hitted discussion about this program . different students has different opinions. some students think perhaps we should have a real conversation with our parents so that they can understand the things that we really want. therefor , we shouldn't lose our tamper to our parents . the other students suggests that whatever our parents did are always think for us ,even sometimes we didn't really agree with them . but we shouldn't argue with them so that will makes them down. That’s all for my speech. Thank you