参考词汇:reduce减少; rest 剩余的; picky 挑剔的; keep an eye on 注意、留意。
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How to reduce food waste Wasting food is a serious problem around the world. The Clean Your Plate Campaign began on the Internet in January last year. It calls on people to reduce food waste. So we must do the following.And our class has a hotted discussion about this serious problem. There it is no doubt that if we would eat the food whichever we meet ,then less food won't be wasted .Therefore, don't eat too much when you in a restaurant,or you should take they to home.Never be picky about the food you don't like perhaps they may not delicious but are good for your body.what'more? Keep an eye on the food in our house . Don't buy too much,especially the vegetables and fruits. With the development of society,our resources are dwindling.Only in those can we solve this problem reasonable So, hurry up!
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