高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；连词使用偏少。

In the past,my hometown was very pretty. my hometown was surrounded by beautiful woods.The river was so clear and the fish had fun very much.But the house was simple and crude.These people hard work but their living was poor. Now many building and factory in the hometown.The size of the vehicle ride the street.With the development of industry,this environment is very terrible. The trees rapid reduction and the fish had disappeared. so we must solve the environmental problems right away.