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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；采用了一些简单的从句；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The autumn travel note partition: freshmen According to the schedule, the touring will including that watch the the botanical garden and the human and nature at morning and go to the palace at afternoon. The partition should to book your name before this Thursday. We will assemble at the gate of the school at 7:00 December 27th. You have to take your lunch yourself and you can leave your baggage in the left. please be on time
