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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;连词使用偏少。
Resume Name: Liming Sex: man Date of birth: June 15th, 1986 Marital status: no Job objective: foreign trade clerk Education background: English department of North college. Personal skills: I have nice English reading, spoken, listening, writing skill. and my second foreign language is Germany. I can do basic communication by Germany, and I am fam with the foreign trade process. Hobbies: I favorite things are football,sing, and movie.