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I am very thankful to our school,because he can give me a chance to write my feeling about learning English. English is important for us. First of all,English have been speading quikly in the world.secondly,we not only can introduce our country to all over the world,but also can learn the trafic of developing country,to the best serves for our country.Thirdly It is very interesting to learn English.