过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。
I am very thankful to our school,because he can give me a chance to write my feeling about learning English. Now more and more people realized English is very important and It is very necessery for us. First of all,English has been speeding quickly in the world.Secondly,we not only can introduce our country to all over the world,but also can learn the traffic of developing country,to the best serves for our country.Thirdly It is very interesting to learn English.