文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
I am very thankful to our school,because he can give me a chance to write my feeling about learning English. Now more and more people realized English is very important and It is very necessary for us. First of all,English Which is widely used all over the world.Secondly,we not only can introduce our country to all over the world,but also can learn the traffic of developing country,to the best serves for our country.you know,the more English you know,the more message you get.Thirdly It is very interesting to learn English.