语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足。
Now more and more people realize English is very important and it is very necessary for us to learn it well. There be three strength about learning English. First of all, English, which is widely used all over the world, is often used as one of the working languages at international meetings and in most international business letters. Second, if we learn English well, we can not only introduce our motherland to the world but also learn modern science and technology from developed countries to servily our country Besides, the more English you know, the more information you will get. Gradually, you’ll find learning English is also fun.