过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多。
Now more and more people realize English is very important and it is very necessary for us to learn it well. It have three strength about learning English. First of all, English, which is widely used all over the world, is often used as one of the working languages at international meetings and in most international business letters. Second, if we learn English well, we can not only introduce our country to the world but also learn modern science and technology from developed countries to servile our country Besides, the more English you know, the more information you will get. Gradually, you’ll find learning English is also fun.