我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I love English.I want to be a teacher after ten years.I will try my best to teach my students.I will use English to teach them in class.I will try my best to make my class interesting. Students like to listen teacher to tell stories.And I will always tell the English stories to my students.And they will be interesting in English,so their English will better and better,it can improve their English。I believe I will be a good teather.