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My home town has changed a lot. For example there use to have many trees and the river was very clealy. But the house is very simple and small . The streets also were very narrow.Many people were very poor. Time goes by . Even though there are many big and heigh bill-dings,the people gets rich ,there are more and more cars. The environment gets worse. The streets are very crowded , trees and fishes are less and less . So I think solve environment problem is the best important thing.