但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。
My home town has changed a lot. For example there use to have many trees and the river was very clearly. But the house is very simple and small. The streets also were very narrow.Many people were very poor. Time goes by. Even though there are many big and heigh bill-dings,the people get rich ,there are more and more cars. The environment gets worse. The streets are very crowded , trees and fishes are less and less . So I think we should solve environment problem qukily.