小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Sun Lei.She is very beautiful.And she is a very nice girl.She always help me.She is good at singing song.She like to eat fruit .When she 17 years old.She is a high school student.Study hard and better than her classmate.English is Sun Lei's best subject.