小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, Kate. She has a long brown hair, and a couple of deep black eyes. What a beautiful girl she is! She is a kind of nice guy, friendly, smart, and easy-going. She is good at singing, including drawing. I really like her. It's so happy to be friends with her.