托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Perseverance makes people stronger There is a common sense that practice makes perfect.It also means perseverance makes people stronger. In the modern world,no one can live without experiencing failures in all aspects such as career,relation,research even family.In this case,what helps us to get through them,obstacles,is positive attitude.In other words,it is Perseverance.For example,almost famous person, Nuton and Einstan,they had already tried zillions times before they attain the final achievements.What's more if you were a doctor and your patient were in a very serious condition.The only one thing you can do is keeping trying.Only in this way can you and your patient become stronger and stronger and over come the evil. As all mentioned,there is no doult perseverance makes you stronger.