托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Perseverance makes people stronger There is a common sense that practice makes perfect.It also means perseverance makes people stronger. In the modern world,no one can live without experiencing failures in all aspects such as career,relation,research,even family.In this case,what helps us to get through them,obstacles,is the positive attitude.In other words,it is Perseverance.For example,almost famous person, Nuton and Einstan,they had already tried hundreds times before they attain the final achievements.What's more if you were a doctor and your patient were in a very serious condition.The only one thing you can do is keep trying.Only in this way can you and your patient become stronger and stronger and over come this situation. As all mentioned,there is no doubt that perseverance makes you stronger.