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My best friend is Tine.She is very pretty.She like bobby.She have a pair of eye.She have long black hair.She is tell and thin.She is like cat,because it very beautiy. She is from USA,but she speak Chines.She's usually dance,because she is very like dance.She want become dancner.She is want going to Beijing.She think very country China is. She is very nice.